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Re: Rant

Posted by Susan47 on August 27, 2005, at 0:23:17

In reply to Rant, posted by Susan47 on August 15, 2005, at 0:33:50

Okay, that was good, Dammit, that was really good. Getting that off my chest and out of my space was intense. Now I read it, and it sounds just fine. All except the end.
There's something wrong with the end.


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