Psycho-Babble Writing | for creative writing | Framed
This thread | Show all | Post follow-up | Start new thread | List of forums | Search | FAQ

Re: a poem...untitled... **trigger**

Posted by ElaineM on July 29, 2006, at 10:13:09

In reply to a poem...untitled... **trigger**, posted by sunnydays on July 28, 2006, at 21:31:28

(((((sunnydays)))))

You sound so desperate - so much despair. I know you're having a terribly difficult time right now, and I can hear that coming through your poem. Especially the different ways you describe the wall (I've got lost in those bumps before), and the squishing pressure at the end...

I don't know how it is for you, but sometimes I feel words are like tears, and hope that when one doesn't come the other will. It's not much but I hope that writing helps a little bit. Some release.

thinking of you, EL


Share
Tweet  

Thread

 

Post a new follow-up

Your message only Include above post


Notify the administrators

They will then review this post with the posting guidelines in mind.

To contact them about something other than this post, please use this form instead.

 

Start a new thread

 
Google
dr-bob.org www
Search options and examples
[amazon] for
in

This thread | Show all | Post follow-up | Start new thread | FAQ
Psycho-Babble Writing | Framed

poster:ElaineM thread:671595
URL: http://www.dr-bob.org/babble/write/20060722/msgs/671731.html