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List of Faults - Not Mine This Time

Posted by AdaGrace on June 1, 2005, at 8:09:47

Mr. Smooth Talker had Many.

#1 He didn't have all his teeth. Missing some that could be seen when he smiled.

#2 He was an alcoholic. It was more important to him than anything else, including me, even though he said I was the most important thing in his life.

#3 He was self employed, which means he worked when he wanted to.

#4 He didn't pay his bills.

#5 I'm pretty sure he never paid income tax.

#6 He lived in poverty AND squaller. Poverty is not the problem, but the squaller was.

#7 He said things he didn't mean.

#8 He used me and threw me away.

#9 He had a small package.

#10 He chewed tobacco, which I'm sure was the reason for fault #1

#11 He always promissed to call, and often didn't.

#12 He chose someone who looks incredibly similar to me. Down to the heigth, body stature, smoking habits, hair color and length........and yet, she is not as good looking as me.


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