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Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain

Posted by sunnydays on September 29, 2006, at 19:47:29

In reply to Re: Halloween Hai-boo chain, posted by Jai Narayan on September 22, 2006, at 7:32:48

I'm new to this, but it sounded fun, so I thought I'd give it a try.

> > stray candy corn bits
> > stuck on my teeth protrude down
> > sweet Count Dracula
>
> aching belly swell
> empty bag with spent candy
> wrappers on my face
>

wrappers on my face
the stickiness in my hair
legs ache from walking

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