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Re: Dying Inside: Lonely in Love

Posted by Susan47 on March 10, 2006, at 12:28:21

In reply to Dying Inside: Lonely in Love, posted by Tanzanite on March 3, 2006, at 19:15:24

> No one hears me
> I knock on the door
> No one is home
> I cry and my tears fall
> But silence is the theme
> I try to find myself
> But I see a frail being
> I try to reach out
> But I am all alone
> I give my heart 100%
> But never get it back
> I feel like I am drowning
> In my own cell
> No air, no way out
> Someone is here
> I speak to him
> But anger comes forth, no tolerance
> It as if I am fighting for nothing
> I pray in the silence
> To my God
> For it seems that maybe he might hear me
> Isolation is another kind of death
> And you reach out to where you can break through
> But, when you are suffocating it is hard
> So hard
> To grasp onto anything real
> To feel love that is expressed
> Once so alive, once so beautiful
> Replaced by fear
> And yet, I still trudge on.
>
> Peace
> Tanzanite

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