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Re: A Day in the Life... » Maynerd

Posted by wildcard11 on January 25, 2006, at 15:21:35

In reply to A Day in the Life..., posted by Maynerd on January 25, 2006, at 14:27:28

>>>Grayness overhead feels so overwhelming
Twisting him up into a ball inside

>>> He sits under the bridge
Watching the water flow by
From its birth it knows where it must go
Embraced by nature it never has to ask why

>>>Instead he is just himself
A broken man that everyone calls dumb
Hopes and dreams gone
Bleeding from the corners of his eyes

>>>Sleep his only sanctuary
Dreams the place where his soul can roam


I think it was great but these lines especially were excellent for me to process photo imaging. Damn good...

 

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