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Hold me When It's Over

Posted by AdaGrace on July 11, 2005, at 9:38:23

Show me I'm worth something.
5 minutes is all I need.
Don't treat me like a whore.
Realize that I can and do bleed.

Hold me when it's over
I don't need very long.
Make me feel loved.
Prove my innermost fears wrong.

Give me your heart,
And hold mine as well.
Tenderness and caring are what I need.
Give me back what I lost when I recently I fell.

Please show me a little respect.
Tell me of your passions and dreams.
Say something nice
After I've given you myself esteem.

Tell me I feel good in your hands,
Whisper "I love you" in my ear.
Take a moment to help me ease into the next moment
before you get up and go get your beer.

I'll never quite get over the nothingness I feel
when you bolt from my arms that are trying to keep ahold.
Laying there stunned in hurtful disbelief
the absence of your presence leaving me cold.

Curling up on your bed
trying to gain back a little pride
I guess that just makes me look like a fool
in your hateful, non emotional eyes.


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