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not my best work but I'm sharing anyways

Posted by GreySkyEyes on July 8, 2005, at 16:36:25

came to you oozing pain
please help me
end the struggle
regain myself

but you let me down
couldn’t see
maybe
you were wrong

here’s a pill
didn’t work
take some more
didn’t work

try another
didn’t work
add a third
didn’t work

“you’re psychotic”
here’s a fourth
didn’t work
double it all

constant retching
thoughts turned blurry
emotions fragile
world was spinning

what happened to
“first do no harm”

why couldn’t you see
maybe
your theories were wrong
you couldn’t face it

why did i stay
i needed you
you gave up
tossed me out

but i moved on
despite you

~gse

(can you tell I had issues with one of my pdocs?)


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