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Re: storm

Posted by cockeyed on July 6, 2005, at 23:57:31

In reply to storm, posted by GreySkyEyes on July 6, 2005, at 15:48:13

hi, greyskyeyes, 'the madness of lightning' I went mad for the 4th of july. blazing demon in my head. My best friend died a year ago, rather than mourn I went mad instead. I don't know if there'll be much sun for a while. I don't want to see the harm I've done. Even tho it struck mostly an empty space, the place I call my soul, it blasted some and layed to waste any peacepeace I've come to know....this is just tiredtired doggerel...glad I read this poem. I really don't know what to say except the lightning sure hit home.
thank god the pdoc has upped my dose because it's embarrassing to go mad. one does not have that right, it's all a fake. Well I showed them,
I skipped the family picnic. Madness is no excuse but god bless cardiomyopathy, heart disease is the perfect excuse.
Your poem happened inside my head. I know this sounds pompous and silly. It did me good to read a report of why I'm still burning. cockeyed.


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