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Re: mental destruction facility

Posted by cockeyed on June 2, 2005, at 23:43:39

In reply to Re: mental destruction facility » cockeyed, posted by Tamar on May 17, 2005, at 8:59:21

> I don't know if you intended it this way, but when I read it, I heard it with the rhythm of rap. It worked pretty well for me!
>
> Yeah, get those frustrations out here. Spot on.
>
> Tamar
> Tamar, thanks. I don't think I can write or even talk about rap. Maybe the anger is there. But to me rap is like a form of shakespeare, another language which, frankly, boggles my mind. "trippingly on the tongue" comes to mind but the verbal agility and off-the-cuff rhyming wipes me out. Maybe I didn't intend it, but felt it. thanks again, cockeyed, [this doesn't seem to make much sense, at least to me, but I think that rap is a really big step in the art of music and self expression. I wish I could pick up on it the way I could with blues.

 

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