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Re: Response from Ex T » Miss Honeychurch

Posted by 10derHeart on May 17, 2005, at 11:32:52

In reply to Response from Ex T, posted by Miss Honeychurch on May 17, 2005, at 9:44:49

I know it only really matters what Tamar thinks and feels on this....but you did a beautiful job, IMO. Just the right balance.

I forget I WASN'T reading a real letter from an ex-T. for a minute. Really. Ending with the part about not being forgotten was brilliant.

I mean, at least for me, it would have gone over pretty darn well. My yardstick is probably ex-T., and how's he written emails around this subject, although I've not been brave enought to ask that direct question about friendship. WE're sort of still gently letting the contact taper off after 11 months, so I'm in a different position than nearly everyone here.

And parts of this sound a little like his words, so I suppose that's why I smiled and nodded.

 

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