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Formative Years

Posted by Toph on May 14, 2005, at 8:51:41

White Hot


BAM, Look what you did
BAM, You piece of crap
BAM, Get away from me
BAM, You look like sh*t
BAM, You stupid *ss
BAM, Don’t ever touch me
BAM, Like anyone cares
BAM, Shut up the f*ck up
BAM, I hate your guts
BAM, That didn’t hurt

Hot, heavy, hardened iron’s
Swift sizzling decent
Its final form
Examined
By the rippling black shadow above.

 

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