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Re: White Room

Posted by cockeyed on May 12, 2005, at 11:30:33

In reply to White Room, posted by PM80 on April 28, 2005, at 13:31:24

Hey, I wanted to read your take on a white room.[cream-ca.67 Disraeli gears. but I'm a music junkie and can't help myself] Maybe this is a metaphor or maybe a real room. I "did" 6 hrs in a little pink room. Lost in the confines of what turned out to be a cell. I think you've written a fine poem...glad you shared it because I'm off on a rave and,,,well gonna write about it now. "...locked me up and throwed away the key" all about my 12 hours in the hell of a"mental health facility" By the way, that titles a quote from Charley Rich's "muddy Waters" Charley was a great singer who killed himself with booze. Hell, I'd like nothing better than a pint of Heaven Hill but God please help me stay away from feeling A-OKAY because then I'm gone. So instead of a bottle in front of me, I'll use this keyboard to do a metaphorical lobotomy. Thanks again, cockeyed.


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