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Flat-Lined

Posted by PM80 on April 27, 2005, at 8:43:43

I feel flat-lined.
No heartbeat of life
calls cadence
to this lonely spirit
suspended so delicately
in a relentless space
forever chasing a void
between each expiring breath
that is meaningless inside.
These words are
too elegant.
I feel hollow.
Hollow
Hollow
Alone
So hollow
So alone
Fake
Empty
Hollow
Alone

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Flat-Lined PM80 4/27/05
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