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Re: I hear the distant thunder » Jai Narayan

Posted by malthus on August 31, 2004, at 21:52:43

In reply to I hear the distant thunder, posted by Jai Narayan on August 30, 2004, at 21:56:29

...(the)lightning plays a hot pink with crescents of blue violet..."

Colors really strike me in your poetry. They say the sense of smell is the strongest in evoking memories, which I believe is true, but colors are right up there for me. It's like I can see you lying there with those colors surrounding you...very beautiful.

malthus

 

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