Posted by Jai Narayan on August 27, 2004, at 14:06:00
In reply to fiction ... Hungry Pavement, Part 2, posted by Atticus on August 27, 2004, at 11:42:51
This could win prizes....seriously
it's great.
I love the dialogue, the fresh images, the sidewalk brotherhood, the man with meat and cement in his body, his shiny shoes and envy of the buildings....
Wow. I am SO GLAD I asked you to post this!!!
If you keep posting all night i will stay up to read this. I'm serious. All night, and at my age that's an incredible thing to do.
Okay what inspired this piece? I know you were on the edge but your edge has such a sense of humor and style...
okay now I'm jealous...green with envy..quickly moving away from envy to adoration....
okay now your on some kind of pedestal.
What can I say, I've embarassed myself and revealed my inner weakness.Jai Narayan
back at the feet of the ever wind swept Atticus with his lovely hair waving in the breeze
poster:Jai Narayan
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