Posted by B2chica on August 25, 2004, at 12:05:27
In reply to Quit, posted by Scott in Vermont on August 25, 2004, at 11:27:18
Hey Scott. This last section was my favorite, boy can i relate. i'm so confused right now with and without meds, i think i'm realizing so many parts of my life are a lie. I've always known much was a lie but i thought they were all lie's to everyone else, now i'm finding things that have been lies to myself. things i'd forgotten. Things no one in my life Now can know. It's like i finally find the truth and yet still have to lie about it...boy my head spins just thinking about it. My brains been mush this last week so sorry if i'm rambling and not making sense.
I also really like the last two lines. My feeling free these last 8 years have been a lie, i'm still trapped, still chained up i just covered it up. I've noticed that my threads are breaking one...by one...
i've become quite scared. of memories, of lies, of everyone, and of myself. The problem is now i can't seem to hide anywhere anymore. i'm lost.
-sorry for rambling.
overall point? loved your writing, and the last paragraph touched me. it's kind of an open wound right now which is what i felt was in your poem.
b2c.
> My friends and family might wonder why
> But who cares what they think, my life is a lie
> I only exist because I can’t leave
> My thread is twisted in this bitter weave
>
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