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Re: poem...The Telephone Just Keeps on Screaming,

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 19, 2004, at 16:29:20

In reply to poem...The Telephone Just Keeps on Screaming, 2001, posted by Atticus on August 19, 2004, at 10:43:21

This poem hurts. It cuts deep.
I read it twice. Once this morning. Then later today. It didn't get any easier.

I thank the Lord for the vinyl siding guy that called your number.

Why did you pick up the phone..... Neo?
Knock, knock...

I am so glad you did.
I never would have known how much I would have missed you.
There just would have been a void.
Great poem. So vivid.

Ta:) Jai Narayan the woman who awaits great poems penned by Atticus


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