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Re: poem ... Pulp, 1997

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 15, 2004, at 11:46:00

In reply to poem ... Pulp, 1997, posted by Atticus on August 14, 2004, at 14:56:09

Out standing.
You made me understand why you threw the fish but did Alyssa ever get the benefit of your clarity?
I have always loved the idea of being under water.
Your under water is torturous.
Stunningly described depiction of pain.
I can feel the critters tugging and pulling.

Another similarity between us: "this may bake your noodle"
but I was madly in love once in my life and he lives in Minnesota. He called himself Richard Blue. It still has a tiny effect on me now.

Jai Narayan of peasants who were against the government in Ireland and had knives built right into their farm tools.


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