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poem...Backwards

Posted by malthus on August 10, 2004, at 20:03:31

Backwards
is where she said he'd be
I thought:
"But she doesn't even know me!"

Calm and cool
is how he said it to me
I thought:
"But she doesn't even know me!"

With her psychology degree
And her judgement of me
I thought:
"But she doesn't even know me!"

Now he wants a family
Backwards is where she said he'd be
I thought:
"But she doesn't even know me!"

Tub full of water
Knife in my hand
Jar full of pills
Never never land.

I wonder what she'd think of me
If she really knew me...


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