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Re: poem ... Feet of Clay in Steel-Toed Boots, 199

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 9, 2004, at 21:14:29

In reply to poem ... Feet of Clay in Steel-Toed Boots, 1999, posted by Atticus on August 9, 2004, at 9:03:42

Oh God.....oh my....
You know the rant...I love it!
Well I do.
You are so incredible!
I was there, I saw it, I tasted it and inhaled the cigarette smoke...(my favorite smoke as well). I was on the sidewalk with you. the leather sounds confining.
The lives we live. They sound so dangerous. My betta fish Indigo has a safer life than you or me.
Once again I am so enamored with your writing.
So awesome.
I wish I could say more but the wine has gotten the better of my faculties. What can I say it was a long day of hard work. I need to ease up.
Is this the poem your were birthing? It's so cool. I celebrate it's arrival.
You rogue.


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