Psycho-Babble Writing | for creative writing | Framed
This thread | Show all | Post follow-up | Start new thread | List of forums | Search | FAQ

Re: poem ... Bullet Riders, 1988

Posted by Jai Narayan on August 7, 2004, at 11:45:12

In reply to poem ... Bullet Riders, 1988, posted by Atticus on August 6, 2004, at 21:03:20

Temple's a new character.
Nice.....

"To see what the
Overthrow of the sun
Will bring."

Love, love love this!

I so enjoy your use of words I have never seen, i.e., "chitinous".
Great fresh vocabulary!
Your poems are filled with a new ways to use an old language.

I appreciate reading your pieces one at a time with days between. I can savor each poem seperately. I enjoy my ever deepening understanding of the characters and you.

What a gift.


Share
Tweet  

Thread

 

Post a new follow-up

Your message only Include above post


Notify the administrators

They will then review this post with the posting guidelines in mind.

To contact them about something other than this post, please use this form instead.

 

Start a new thread

 
Google
dr-bob.org www
Search options and examples
[amazon] for
in

This thread | Show all | Post follow-up | Start new thread | FAQ
Psycho-Babble Writing | Framed

poster:Jai Narayan thread:374887
URL: http://www.dr-bob.org/babble/write/20040729/msgs/375063.html