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Re: poem ... Tyrannosaurus Meds, 1997

Posted by Jai Narayan on July 29, 2004, at 20:21:11

In reply to poem ... Tyrannosaurus Meds, 1997, posted by Atticus on July 29, 2004, at 11:14:06

So many runs at the real thing....
I am so glad that is over for you.
Where is your sweet wife?
A poem so hard and edgy.
Violent and relentless.
massive and yet melting at her feet.
Love can soften some things, yes?

If you have more under your hat....let's see it. Your words are so powerful.
Thank you for being so forthcoming.


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