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Re: MISSING THEM

Posted by antigua on January 8, 2004, at 8:22:26

In reply to MISSING THEM, posted by starrlight on January 7, 2004, at 23:12:58

Wow. Sounds like you are hurting. But I really like this part:

"Doesn't equal holding them
and watching as they prey"

Did you mean "pray"? If you did mean "prey" it's even more powerful. Sorry if I appear stupid, I read it both ways.
antigua

 

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