Posted by Phil on October 20, 2014, at 8:09:47
In reply to Re: This is good but will anyone read it? I hope so :) » Phil, posted by SLS on October 19, 2014, at 20:02:42
I agree, Scott. It's not always based on fact. I write fast. Maybe just trying show others that know nothing about this disease how it can feel for some.
I do come back to me but it may be me from years ago and time has passed. So, in some ways, I've forgotten all of the things I used to do, eat, etc. And I've aged. In that way, it does sometimes feel that I have forgotten me and I'm like a new person trying to connect the dots. Maybe like amnesia. Unlike treatments which are based on studies, facts, and sometimes educated or wild *ss guesses, poetry takes a much different view. Mine, anyway.
It's all good but not always to be taken literally. I give myself slack. I'm just reaching to make the uninitiated know how it feels.
But I love criticism because I know where to go next time.Thanks for reading this.
"Whats wrong? Nothing. Well, it takes more energy to frown than it does to smile. Yeah, you know it takes more energy to point that out than it does to leave me alone? Bill Hicks
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