In need of punctuation

Posted by shar on February 21, 2003, at 13:12:46

I really like this quote I came across, and this is how it was punctuated, but it seems still wanting to me:
"As you work, work for the working rather than for the fruits of the work and it becomes art and connection with the essence of being."
Any ideas?
Shar

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In need of punctuation shar 2/21/03
Re: In need of punctuation » shar beardedlady 2/21/03
seems good to me... » shar IsoM 2/21/03
Re: seems good to me... » IsoM beardedlady 2/21/03
P.S. » IsoM beardedlady 2/21/03
ah--my new motivation! (nm) » shar rayww 2/21/03
Re: check this one out :-) » beardedlady IsoM 2/21/03
Re: In need of punctuation » beardedlady rayww 2/21/03
Hardy har har! You're right! beardedlady 2/21/03
Re: In need of punctuation noa 2/22/03

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