Posted by rayww on February 21, 2003, at 16:55:59
In reply to Re: In need of punctuation » shar, posted by beardedlady on February 21, 2003, at 14:20:46
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> "As you work, work for the working, rather than the fruits of the work, and it becomes art and connection with the essence of being."With a pause after every "work" does this feel too much like work, than like essense and art?
Without the comma, without the pause, art and connection with essense of being can overlay work for the working. It becomes a single breath idea, and far more motivating.
"As you work, work for the working rather than for the fruit of the work and it will become art and connect with the essence of being."
"As you work, work for the working rather than for the fruit of the work
and
it will become art and connect with the essence of being."
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