Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 741468

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ghost walk

Posted by sleepygirl on March 15, 2007, at 23:03:30

would've been better to say
I miss you now you're gone
but as it is there's not a thing to say
a strange crowd gathers perplexed
what are we looking at anyway??
there is no time to figure out
say your prayers and just get out
stranger still
another ghost
another empty place
no rights to be here
nothing here to see
another ghost
another empty space
no footsteps left to follow
just another ghost
-uninvited alien stranger

 

Re: ghost walk

Posted by Iwillsurvive on March 26, 2007, at 12:24:08

In reply to ghost walk, posted by sleepygirl on March 15, 2007, at 23:03:30

Dunno whats it bout, but I ;liked it lots.

 

Re: ghost walk

Posted by sleepygirl on April 15, 2007, at 22:58:41

In reply to ghost walk, posted by sleepygirl on March 15, 2007, at 23:03:30


the radio speaks,
the words meant just for you
they're casing the joint...it's true
who's got the key now?


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