Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 717603

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To Someone I Once Loved

Posted by Poet on December 30, 2006, at 14:47:30

You’re perhaps really the only one
Who I ever felt close to
You made me feel special
You made me feel smart
I miss the honesty in your eyes
I miss your genuine smile
If I could back in time
I wouldn’t be afraid to say it
The silent sadness of fear
Will hang onto me forever

 

Re: To Someone I Once Loved » Poet

Posted by ronaldo on January 13, 2007, at 11:43:31

In reply to To Someone I Once Loved, posted by Poet on December 30, 2006, at 14:47:30

Sweet regretfulness that lingers forever.

I like it. Its sharp and to the point.

ronaldo

 

the more I read it, the more I like it (nm)

Posted by ronaldo on January 13, 2007, at 11:47:32

In reply to Re: To Someone I Once Loved » Poet, posted by ronaldo on January 13, 2007, at 11:43:31

 

Re: To Someone I Once Loved » ronaldo

Posted by Poet on January 14, 2007, at 11:38:47

In reply to Re: To Someone I Once Loved » Poet, posted by ronaldo on January 13, 2007, at 11:43:31

Hi Ronoldo,

Thanks for reading and liking it. I'm going through a major period of had I said, had I done, would my life be better, etc. and this poem was the result of one of my I should have saids.

Poet


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