Psycho-Babble Writing Thread 716028

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Admissions of a cutter

Posted by Jai Narayan on December 23, 2006, at 20:37:22


I rake the razor over my pearly white wrist
red line appears
I wonder why you don’t like me
the line grows
how did I push you away
I deepen my steele
what did I do
I am in the ER
people click their tongues
I slip a pill into my mouth
I am still wondering-waiting

 

Re: Admissions of a cutter » Jai Narayan

Posted by Bobby on December 29, 2006, at 19:53:13

In reply to Admissions of a cutter, posted by Jai Narayan on December 23, 2006, at 20:37:22

this is one of my favorites--very vivid--makes feel for the cutter---truly I do--not just blowing sunshine up your _ _ _
bobby

 

Re: Admissions of a cutter » Jai Narayan

Posted by Poet on December 30, 2006, at 14:52:43

In reply to Admissions of a cutter, posted by Jai Narayan on December 23, 2006, at 20:37:22

Hi Jai,

I'm wondering-waiting about many things, too.

Take care.

Poet


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