Posted by ed_uk2010 on August 29, 2010, at 15:24:44
In reply to Re: FML, posted by Maxime on August 29, 2010, at 15:19:55
That's really good Maxie (and that really is a compliment because I don't normally like poetry that much). I liked that.
Don't delete your poetry Maxie. Keep it, even if its hidden.
> No, I do writing for a non-profit organization as a volunteer. But I only write Press Releases and things like that.
>
> I write a lot of poetry though. One that I wrote recently:
>
> Losing myself.
>
> I summoned strength
> to find my inner truth
>
> Walked many corridors
> within my mind
>
> chasing thoughts that
> sought to render me
> weak
>
> Ascended to acceptance
>
> and there comfort held
> me in its embrace
>
> I became whole
> in welcome of
> my own companionship
>
> But peace is fleeting...
>
> For serenity cannot
> be bestowed to those
> who destroy themselves
>
> And as the memory
> of who that woman was
> slowly fades
>
> loneliness once again
> calls my name
>
> Often I will destroy all my poetry when I am really angry because I feel like it's not good enough. I would have many poems in my collection if I stopped deleting them.
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