Psycho-Babble Social Thread 15828

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A poem for cutters, early draft, (( A SACRAFICE ))

Posted by kid_A on December 20, 2001, at 15:14:56

A SACRAFICE

my body, soft, pliant,
damageable, ignorant and
dumb

waiting soft like a
bunny to be swung toeside
up

waiting in water, up to
my neck, when it reaches
the nose we are done
for

waiting for an executioner
to come and Pow! like an
angel, right on
time

and i know it is true
and i know it is true
it is true, it is! i know
it.

i can't run, my legs
aren't for running
and my Doctor Guillotine
is on me, mousey, like a
goshawk

i have no choice in
this, i've got to be
shaven and to be shorn,
my wings must be
clipped

and still, i am a
phantom, so how should
i get my beheading!
oh dearest, what
drama!

but Zing, and it falls,
a little like lightning,
and all at the once,
the body, i am whole
again

my legs, now for
running and they leap
into the self, oh such
wonder

and there, just a little
blood, a keepsake for
the butterfly, utterly useless
now

and there, a dying going
on, all those little
cells, silently gasping for
air

and signs, and road maps,
those signals of change
i wont be forgiven, yet i'm
saved

and I'm grown, a real boy,
and like an honest
Godblessyou, I stuff my
soul back in, just
like a natural
fit.

Re: WOW...in a good way (nm)

Posted by tina on December 20, 2001, at 15:54:20

In reply to A poem for cutters, early draft, (( A SACRAFICE )), posted by kid_A on December 20, 2001, at 15:14:56

how do you write so well? Kid_A (nm)

Posted by Katey on December 20, 2001, at 20:41:04

In reply to A poem for cutters, early draft, (( A SACRAFICE )), posted by kid_A on December 20, 2001, at 15:14:56

thanks for reading, comments! (blush)! -the Kid... (nm)

Posted by kid_A on December 22, 2001, at 19:40:32

In reply to how do you write so well? Kid_A (nm), posted by Katey on December 20, 2001, at 20:41:04

THAT WAS GREAT (nm)

Posted by ST on December 29, 2001, at 4:23:59

In reply to A poem for cutters, early draft, (( A SACRAFICE )), posted by kid_A on December 20, 2001, at 15:14:56

THAT WAS GREAT!!

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