Psycho-Babble Social Thread 14948

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Psycho Haiku

Posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 10:39:06

A Poem by John Doenut

Bad news today
Must take evasive action
Lots going on


 

Re: Psycho Haiku » JohnDoenut

Posted by Kristi on December 5, 2001, at 11:53:45

In reply to Psycho Haiku, posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 10:39:06

Hi
I know it's none of my business... but since were anonymous, I'll ask.
what happened? What's the bad news and evasive action . Are you Ok????????

> A Poem by John Doenut
>
> Bad news today
> Must take evasive action
> Lots going on

 

Re: Psycho Haiku

Posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 12:22:28

In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku » JohnDoenut, posted by Kristi on December 5, 2001, at 11:53:45

Ok. You can ask. Im ok, thanks for asking!
My job status is now up in the air.
I have updated my resume and begun sending it out just in case.
I just thought the format of the Haiku in the Psycho Babble forum would be a new, and funny maybe way to express whats going on with people. Psycho Haiku. Anyone else is free to try some. . . :)

J


> Hi
> I know it's none of my business... but since were anonymous, I'll ask.
> what happened? What's the bad news and evasive action . Are you Ok????????
>

 

Re: Psycho Haiku

Posted by Simcha on December 5, 2001, at 12:25:43

In reply to Psycho Haiku, posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 10:39:06

Strange mood in head
Thoughts ripple through soul out of body
I must affirm

------ Simcha -----------------

> A Poem by John Doenut
>
> Bad news today
> Must take evasive action
> Lots going on

 

Re: Psycho Haiku

Posted by Roo on December 5, 2001, at 14:03:51

In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku, posted by Simcha on December 5, 2001, at 12:25:43

> Strange mood in head
> Thoughts ripple through soul out of body
> I must affirm
>
> ------ Simcha -----------------
>
>
>
> > A Poem by John Doenut
> >
> > Bad news today
> > Must take evasive action
> > Lots going on

Roo's Haiku:

Sent out email
demanded attention from male crush
haste and regret

 

Re: Psycho Haiku=instructions?

Posted by susan C on December 5, 2001, at 14:38:40

In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku, posted by Roo on December 5, 2001, at 14:03:51

What are the insturctions for Haiku?

a mouse scratching her head, forgetting school

 

Re: Psycho Haiku=instructions?

Posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 15:01:37

In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku=instructions?, posted by susan C on December 5, 2001, at 14:38:40

> What are the insturctions for Haiku?

I think I/we are only vaguely following any rules.
Have you or anyone seen computer Haiku?
http://dept.physics.upenn.edu/~heiney/jokes/haiku.html

Windows NT crashed.
I am the Blue Screen of Death.
No one hears your screams.

--

A file that big?
It might be very useful.
But now it is gone.

--

For formal rules I have found this:
http://www.ahapoetry.com/keirule.htm
In grade school we tried to follow these rules given examples and write our own. Now I just punt! :)

Chaos swirls around me
It has no effect
Drug induced stupor

Or I could say:

Drug induced stupor
Chaos swirls around me
It has no effect

Why not?! :)

JohnD

 

Re: Psycho Haiku=instructions?

Posted by nightlight on December 5, 2001, at 23:23:40

In reply to Re: Psycho Haiku=instructions?, posted by JohnDoenut on December 5, 2001, at 15:01:37

> > What are the insturctions for Haiku?
>
I always just did the loose 17-syllable thing~

'A spirit lay be

side me through the night and we

shared intimacies'

nightlight-1972


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