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Troilet: Mommy Daddy

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 8, 2006, at 23:08:32

Troilet: Mommy & Daddy

Her mad ravings made his skin crawl
Forever whispering to the inhabitants in her head
Only when he hit the seventies did he bawl
Her mad ravings made his skin c-r-a-w-l;
I pen this to my friends at Scrawl
Valentine’s Day, six years he is dead
Her mad ravings made his skin crawl
Forever whispering to the inhabitants in her head!

 

Re: Troilet: Mommy Daddy

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 9, 2006, at 15:14:53

In reply to Troilet: Mommy Daddy, posted by Jai Narayan on February 8, 2006, at 23:08:32

wow, Jai this is really cool.
how to be so alone on this site...I could write a book.

 

Re: Troilet: Mommy Daddy » Jai Narayan

Posted by Sabrina_0805 on February 10, 2006, at 14:08:21

In reply to Re: Troilet: Mommy Daddy, posted by Jai Narayan on February 9, 2006, at 15:14:53

I feel sad that you feel alone.

I only read your post now and I think you wrote beautifully. Actually - I always have!

Sabrina

 

Sabrina...: )+O=

Posted by Jai Narayan on February 14, 2006, at 11:05:45

In reply to Re: Troilet: Mommy Daddy » Jai Narayan, posted by Sabrina_0805 on February 10, 2006, at 14:08:21

> I feel sad that you feel alone.
>
> I only read your post now and I think you wrote beautifully. Actually - I always have!
>
> Sabrina

It's hard right now, thanks so much for your kind words.
I am trying to accept my saddness.
6 years ago this morning my dad died and I can't seem to shake the blues.
Your comment helped a lot.
I saw an amazing movie last night "Constant Gardener".
Have you seen it?
thanks for posting to my post.

 

Re: Sabrina...: )+O=

Posted by Sabrina0805 on February 15, 2006, at 4:38:31

In reply to Sabrina...: )+O=, posted by Jai Narayan on February 14, 2006, at 11:05:45

Jai, my thoughts are with you as you think of and miss your Dad.
I haven't seen the movie but will check it out.

Take care of yourself Jai.

Sabrina

 

Re: Troilet: Triolet

Posted by Jai Narayan on March 4, 2006, at 16:09:29

In reply to Troilet: Mommy Daddy, posted by Jai Narayan on February 8, 2006, at 23:08:32

boy once I get it wrong...I get it wrong over and over..
duh...
Jai


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