Posted by Jai Narayan on September 17, 2004, at 11:48:33
In reply to Re: a glass held tightly... » Jai Narayan, posted by Atticus on September 16, 2004, at 20:31:54
Thanks for your interpertation of the poem.
But how did you like the poem?
Does it work?
I incorporated a dream, my past relationship and using "I, you and our" as a way of structuring.
I just wasn't sure it pulled together.
Having my ex-husband die is making me look back a bit.
I guess at 56 looking back might be a common phenomenon.