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Re: What did I do Wrong?! » WonderingWhy

Posted by noa on April 24, 2004, at 8:48:10

In reply to What did I do Wrong?!, posted by WonderingWhy on April 12, 2004, at 1:33:19

The answer is NOTHING, of course. I'm glad you are writing and hoping that through the poems you will see that it isn't you or anything you did.

Great poem.

> My mother left us when I was a girl...
> I was 15, she would have left sooner I'm sure but she waiting until I was "old" enough
> She didn't say anything...just l e f t.
> 8 years later, I still go through that day
>
> She phones on holidays - sometimes
> I tried but gave UP.
> She WORKS WORKS WORKS.
> Doesn't care about my life...
> I say "I love you" when i get the nerve...
> she doesn't.
> It's hard to pretend that it doesn't hurt.
> It does. Oh god it hurts.
> What did i do wrong?

 

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