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Re: Poetry $2 Phil

Posted by rockerchick46 on November 2, 2013, at 19:22:08

In reply to Poetry $2, posted by Phil on October 20, 2013, at 18:23:55

Hi, Phil.

> To have your presence acknowledged
> Whether it's good or bad or worse
> Is something we all need I think
> A reality check when we're on the blink
> From the snake swimming in the sink
> A man embedded in the wall
> And we make one last call
> The message goes out to all
> But no one cares it seems
> And all of our silly dreams
> Are now apathy pain and loneliness
> She's in her wedding dress
> No one shows and no one cares
> No one cares at all.

I think this composition is wonderful.


- Scott


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