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Posted by trouble on March 16, 2002, at 20:46:03

In reply to Re: slattern, posted by Zo on March 16, 2002, at 17:54:52

I know, Zo, you're saying exactly what I need to learn, but I don't know how. When I put these things in paragraph form it seems so jumbled up. Do you know where I could get some instruction about line breaks? The last academician I showed my poems to said the exact same thing, nowhere near so kindly as you. She said my line breaks were totally fucked, she wouldn't even disucuss them, just told me to go home and read my Bukowski to get an idea what to do.
Ok, so I've read 7 months worth, and the line breaks you're seeing was my big idea of post-Bukowski improvement. ARGGGH.
Anyway, thank you for your thoughts. Can I ask for one more? The Slattern thing goes over well when I perform it, do you think I should just leave it at that, and nix the printed page altogether?


thanks again,


trouble
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(I wish I knew why my handle keeps appearing twice like that lately, and I have to go back and remove the second one. Strange, no?)


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